A handwritten version sent to Margaret and Philip Burne-Jones, now among the Kipling Papers at the University of Sussex Special Collections. It is signed W.O.P. and subtitled
‘a demi-official communication compiled at the offices of the C.M.G. for the benefit of other Cousins. With marginal notes and official translations.’
The Indian words are glossed in the margins (see the Notes on the Text below). There are two illustrations, one of which, opposite stanza 2, shows the sun rising, with the couplet:
And the day shall have a sun,
That shall make thee wish it done.
At the end Kipling writes, ‘And he hadn’t time to finish an otherwise perfect epic’; and on the reverse, ‘Shew this to Miss Plowden and she will find out one or two mistakes.’ The poem is undated, but Rutherford suggests that Kipling’s awareness of possible errors in translation suggests an early date, perhaps Christmas 1883.
The explanatory notes in the margin, in an old-fashioned style of English, are reminiscent of the 1817 version, with glosses, of Samuel Taylor Coleridge’s “Rime of the Ancient Mariner.” This may well have been in the Head’s library at USC. See also “My Hat”, written in 1880 when Kipling was still at school.
other cousins Kipling’s mother, Alice Macdonald (1837-1910) had three married sisters,
Georgiana Burne-Jones (1840-1920), married to Edward Burne-Jones, the distinguished painter, and mother of Margaret and Philip
Agnes Poynter (1843-1906), married to Edward Poynter, later President of the Royal Academy, and mother of Ambrose and Hugh
Louise Baldwin (1845-1925), married to Alfred Baldwin, a wealthy ironmaster, and mother of Stanley, who later became Prime-Minister.
W.O.P. Margaret Burne-Jones explained that:
Ruddy and I called each other Wop in our teens, and for long after. Some laughing talk and slip of the tongue produced the word. And then in Dickens’s Letters we found one signed “The Sparkler of Albion”, and so when Ruddy went to India, he became The Wop of Asia and I the Wop of Albion. [ORG p. 5060.]
They had a lively correspondence between 1884 and 1889. [See Pinney, Letters of Rudyard Kipling volume 1]
See also Kipling’s unpublished poem “The Wop of Asia”, inscribed in a copy of Echoes sent to Margaret Burne-Jones.
C.M.G. The Civil and Military Gazette, the newspaper for which Kipling worked as Assistant Editor in Lahore from 1882 to 1887, living with his parents.
Miss Plowden Edith Plowden (1854-1947) was a close friend of Kipling’s parents in India, to whom Rudyard sent many of his early poems.
She came of an old-established Anglo-Indian family, had been born in Calcutta, and would have been familiar with more than one Indian language.
Notes on the Text
(the words explained by Kipling are in italics)
Tamil, Urdu and Hindi three languages spoken in India. Tamil in the South, Urdu mainly in the Punjab and neighbouring areas, Hindi in the Northern provinces.
tunda moorghie cold fowl
Sc. open space
kummels heavy cloths
Rook-ud-din Mian Rukn Din, the Muslim foreman on the News side at the C.M.G.
Kia hai what is it ?
Gurebpurwar Jawab Munta ‘Protector of the poor, an answer is wanted’.
jabberwocky nonsense (from Lewis Carroll’s poem of that name in Through the Looking Glass)
chuck done with
Syce bolow call the groom
terais sun hats
Juldee Jao go quickly
chillag wick in oil
Hakim Sahib ke gher khan hai? Where is the Doctor’s House?
Memsahib bemar the Memsahib is ill
Memsahib bahut bemar? Is the lady very ill?
Tomara pahs nehai sowar? Haven’t you a mounted messenger to send?
increase of population the doctor is being called to a confinement.
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