[Draft of Mar 3 2003]
From the outset "McAndrew's Hymn" attracted much critical attention. Kipling. The Critical Heritage (ed. Roger Lancelyn Green, Barnes and Noble 1971) provides five comments on the poem, all dating, roughly, from the period when it was first published.
T S Eliot on the poem
Also in The Critical Heritage, but from a period when Kipling was, in critical terms at least, regarded as being played out, T S Eliot, in “Kipling Redivivus", review of The Years Between, in the Athenaeum, May 1919, comments:
“And this is why both Swinburne’s and Mr. Kipling’s verse, in spite of the positive manner which each presses to his service, appear to lack cohesion – to be, frankly, immature. What is the point of view, one man’s experience of life, behind “Mandalay” … and “MacAndrew”” ? (sic)
In 1941, some 20 years later, Faber and Faber published A Choice of Kipling’s Verse made by T.S. Eliot. In an introductory Essay, Eliot discusses “McAndrew’s Hymn” saying that “it is in two poems extremely unlike Browning’s in style – “McAndrew’s Hymn” and “The Mary Gloster” – that Browning’s influence is most visible. Why is the influence of Swinburne and Browining so different from what you would expect? It is due, I think, to a difference of motive: what they wrote they intended to be poetry; Kipling was not trying to write poetry at all.
There have been many writers of verse who have not aimed at writing poetry: with the exception of a few writers of humorous verse, they are mostly quickly forgotten. The difference is that they never did write poetry. Kipling does write poetry, but that is not what he is setting out to do. It is this peculiarity of intention that I have in mind in calling Kipling a ballad-writer …”
Eliot writes a few pages later “It would be a mistake, also, … to suppose that the audience for balladry consists of factory hands, mill hands, miners and agricultural labourers. … On the other hand, the audience for the ballad includes many who are, according to the rules, highly educated.
He goes on, “What is unusual about Kipling’s ballads is his singleness of intention in attempting to convey no more to the simple minded than can be taken in on one reading or hearing. They are best when read aloud, and the ear requires no training to follow them easily. With this simplicity of purpose goes a consummate gift of word, phrase and rhythm.”
when talking about "Danny Deever", Eliot says: “There are other poems in which the element of poetry is more difficult to put one’s finger on ... Two poems which belong together are “McAndrew’s Hymn”, and “The ‘Mary Gloster’” ... They are dramatic monologues, obviously, as I have said, owing something to Browning’s invention, though metrically and intrinsically ballads. The popular verdict has chosen the first as the more memorable: I think that the popular verdict is right, but just what it is that raises “McAndrew’s Hymn” above “The ‘Mary Gloster’” is not easy to say. The rapacious old ship owner of the latter is not easily dismissed, and the presence of the silent son gives a dramatic quality absent from McAndrew’s soliloquy. One poem is no less successful than the other. If the McAndrew poem is the more memorable, it is not because Kipling is more inspired by the contemplation of the success of failure that by that of the failure of success, but because there is greater poetry in the subject matter. It is McAndrew who creates the poetry of Steam, and Kipling who creates the poetry of McAndrew.”
In the 1970s there was a mention of McAndrew in Rudyard Kipling, by Martin Fido, (Hamlyn Publishing, 1974.) “On trials in a new destroyer … he was thrilled and impressed by the practical example of the romance of steam, and delighted to discover that all the engineers knew his poem “McAndrew’s Hymn”.” This comment was identified in The Strange Ride of Rudyard Kipling by Angus Wilson (Martin Secker and Warburg, 1977) as coming from a letter to Doctor Conland. Wilson thought highly of "McAndrew's Hymn".
“But the finest celebrations of machines are to be found in his two imitation Browning monologue poems, “McAndrew’s Hymn” (1893) and “The Mary Gloster” (1894). And here he celebrates not the machines, but the men who work them – a Scots ships’ engineer and a hard old tough-living, rich ship-owner on his death-bed. Both are positive hymns to the life force. They work perfectly. And one sees well why a man who could encompass the whole meaning of an individual life in a single poem would find the intricacies and necessary longueurs of novel-writing uncongenial.”Wilson then quotes:
“From coupler-flange to spindle-guide I see Thy hand, O God:So speaks, says Wilson, McAndrew, the Scottish engineer, of his machine, the engine of which he is at once master and servant, which conforms to the laws of nature and yet is altogether dependent on his skill and courage.”
The next biographer to make mention of “McAndrew’s Hymn” is Lord Birkenhead, (Rudyard Kipling, Weidenfeld and Nicholson, 1978). (It is worthwhile reminding readers that the first draft of this work was originally completed in 1947, but could not be published because of the objections of Kipling's daughter, Mrs Bambridge. It eventually came out in a revised version after the death of both Mrs Bambridge, and the author)
Referring to the year 1893, Birkenhead writes: “he was also working on “McAndrew’s Hymn”, in which he extolled the glory of steam, a poem which was to lead on to other which were to fascinate some and repel others, in which machinery talked in complex jargon - stories which were to reach their perfection in “The Ship that Found Herself” in 1895.”
For 1894, he writes: “Supreme among his verses at this time, was the poem “The Mary Gloster” – similar in form but far more successful than “McAndrew’s Hymn” – in which a villainous shipowner on his deathbed berates his effeminate son.”
It is interesting to note the opposing views of which was the better or more popular poem of the two. Eliot prefered “McAndrew’s Hymn”, while Lord Birkenhead favoured “The Mary Gloster”. Each implied that their view was shared by the public!
In 1994 appeared Peter Keating’s Rudyard Kipling - The Poet (Secker and Warburg, 1994), the first, and so far only, major critical study to consider Kipling’s poetry alone. Keating says (p. 91):
“Unlike his close contemporary Conrad, who wrote primarily about the vanishing world of sailing-ships, Kipling’s imagination was excited by steam, engine-power, speed and the men who created and maintained such modern wonders. With the Scottish engineer in “McAndrew’s Hymn” he prayed that the Lord would send a man like Robbie burns to sing the Song o’ Steam. Perhaps, for a while, he believed that he himself might fill that role, though with the genuine humility he always showed to this poet, he also described his attempts to capture the essence of the modern world as merely “roughing out the work” for a greater poet to come “as Ferguson did for Burns”.Peter Keating also goes into greater detail about “McAndrew’s Hymn” and “The Mary Gloster” (pp. 108-110):
“They are quite distinct from the Browning parodies and pastiches he had previously written, and also unlike the music-hall types he was still using for some of the barrack-room ballads. Complex character analysis and psychological subtlety are not qualities usually associated with Kipling’s poetry, and even here in “McAndrew’s Hymn” and “The ‘Mary Gloster’, both clearly poems of character, the experiences and opinions of the speakers are more obviously imbued with Kipling’s own views than they would be in a comparable Browning monologue.Comments in recent biographies
Harry Ricketts, in The Unforgiving Minute (Chatto and Windus, 1999) says, referring to the memories of Kipling by Arthur Conan Doyle:
“Doyle’s reminiscences also afford a rare glimpse of Kipling reading his work. Earlier in the year, he had written “McAndrew’s Hymn”, a Browningesque dramatic monologue in which an ageing Scottish engineer reviewed his life at sea and his discovery of the idiosyncratic faith which had sustained him.Referring to The Seven Seas Ricketts comments:
“A few poems showed an ambitious interweaving of low-brow and high-brow elements. Speaker, idiom and milieu were calculatedly working-class in “McAndrew’s Hymn”, the engineer ‘alone wi’ God an’ these/My engines’; yet the dramatic monologue form, with its artful construction of an apparently artless narrator was literary and sophisticated. The poem imagined one kind of reader who would fuss over all the technical jargon, another who would see at once that McAndrew’s wish for ‘a man like Robbie Burns to sing the Song o’ Steam!’ was being granted even as they read. And so, rather neatly, Kipling was able to present himself as simultaneously the poetic heir of both Burns, provincial maverick, and Browning, English literary establishment.”Finally, we come to Andrew Lycett’s Rudyard Kipling(Weidenfeld and Nicolson, 1999). On p. 267, Lycett reports:
“When Henry James came to stay at Tisbury, Rudyard spared him his observations on Americans abroad …. And read him his paean to a Scottish ship’s engineer, ‘McAndrew’s Hymn’, which would appear in Scribner’s Magazine in December. No doubt Rudyard, in expansive mood, adopted the broad accent of his Macdonald forebears. For this was a poem he had been working towards. He knew he could always write some ditty based on the aspirations of the soldiers’ mess, but he needed new subject matter. Over the previous two years he had been exploring the nature of romance; 'was it really achievable in an age of season tickets?' he asked in "The King". As he looked back over British history, he felt this elusive quality could still be found at sea, and suggested as much in several poems in the early 1890s ranging in style from "A Song of the English" to "The Ballad of the “Clampherdown". His personal contribution to the established genre of nautical verse was to invoke the role of machinery on the ocean wave. He achieved this in ‘McAndrew’s Hymn’, which chronicles the heroics of a ship’s engineer in command of his ‘purrin’ dynamoes’ as they beat out their message (reminiscent of Rudyard’s own politics): ‘Law, Orrder, Duty an’ Restraint, Obedience, Discipline!’”