[August 21 2005]
[Title] Dungara has not been traced. There is a town called Dungrapur in the State of Rajasthan 90 miles north-east of Ahmedabad, but the presence of the Nilgiri Nettle in this story suggests a location further north, in the foothills of the Himalayas.
[Heading] This is a deliberate misquotation of a line in A Life Drama (1853) by Alexander Smith (1830-1867) which should read: 'Like a pale martyr with his shirt of fire'. This no doubt refers to a martyr being burned at the stake or perhaps wearing a hair-shirt as an act of penance. Smith was one of the writers available to the young Kipling at United Services College when the Head gave him the freedom of his library. See “The Last Term,” (Stalky & Co.), Something of Myself (p.36) and Chapter 3 of Carrington.
[Page 245, line 2] Berbulda Hill not identified – perhaps a made-up name.
[Page 245, line 3] The great god Dungara see Title above.
[Page 245, line 3] the God of Things as They Are This is the last line of the Kipling's verse “When Earth’s Last Picture is Painted.”
[Page 245, line 8] the Madness of Yat Not traced.
[Page 245, line 9] the Buria Kol (See 249/27 below – Suria Kol)
[Page 245, line 13] Assistant Collector and Agent a Collector was the chief administrative officer of a District which was sub-divided into Mamlats or Tahsils for which his Assistant Collectors, like Gallio in this tale, were responsible.
[Page 245, line 18] Tübingen town, university and school of theology in Würtemberg, Germany.
[Page 245, line 22] Heidelberg famous city and university in Baden, Germany.
[Page 245, line 22] a call in this context, a belief that one is summoned by God to a certain course of action,
[Page 246, lines 2 – etc] ‘We will these heathen now… etc. T is dialogue is written as if it had been translated literally from he German and not rearranged into the English idiom. The American writer Mark Twain, whom Kipling greatly admired, uses this technique with humorous effect in his Innocents Abroad (1869) and A Tramp Abroad (1880) . [See “An Interview with Mark Twain” in Vol. 2 From Sea to Sea page 182].
[Page 246, line 8] lay-reader a layman licensed by a bishop to perform certain duties in the Church of England.
[Page 246, line 9] Kamala a red powder made from the fruit of Mallotus phillippinensis and used in medicine to expel tape-worms. (Black)
[Page 246, line 10] gorge of Malair not traced, probably a made-up name.
[Page 246, line 11] Panth ORG suggests this may be Pantha in Upper Burma.
[Page 246, line 13] Buria Kol a mountain tribe, [not traced; information would be appreciated; Ed.]
[Page 247, lines 10-17] As the day wears etc ORG suggests that these lines indicate that Kipling must have been a Christian believer. This has been much discussed by the commentators, with no firm conclusion. [See page 248, line 23 below].
[Page 247, lines 10-17] one creed as good as another this is the Riddle of the Sphinx attributed to several sources: All sensible men are of the same religion, but no sensible man ever tells. [quoted in “Dead Kings” (Letters of Travel)]. See also the verse “The Two-Sided Man.”
[Page 247, line 20] Bannockburn Medical Crusade Bannockburn is a town in Scotland where, in a notable battle, the English army was defeated by Robert the Bruce in 1314. This may refer to medical assistance for India provided by the town in Victorian times. [any information would be appreciated; Ed.]
[Page 247, line 22] Racine Gospel Agency in this context, a city in Wisconsin, U.S.A. which may well have had such a mission.
[Page 248, line 1] David of St, Bees St Bees was a Theological College in Cumberland in northern England from 1816 to 1897.
[Page 248, lines 12 & 13)] Gallio etc a direct quotation from Acts 18, verse 17; this Gallio was the deputy of Achaia (verse 12), and Paul was brought before him. but he would not deal with Jewish law.(verse 15)
[Page 248, line 18] quinine an antimalarial drug – see Dr Sheehan’s Kipling and Medicine Kipling and Medicine.
[Page 248, line 18] Athon Dazé This is probably an invented name.
[Page 248, line 23] one creed as good as another see the Note to page 247, lines 10-17 above.
[Page 249, line 19] sunstroke see Dr.Sheehan’s Kipling and Medicine.
[Page 249, line 22] five rupees about 40 pence sterling in today's currency.
[Page 249, line 24] bowed down in the House of Rimmon Do something one knows to be wrong – see 2 Kings 5,18
[Page 249, line 27] Suria Kol presumably a neighbouring tribe.
[Page 249, line 31] Padri 'Father' in Portuguese, Spanish and Italian. A well established form of address to a priest n the Catholic Church today.
[Page 250, line 17] monarch of all I survey This is from Verses Supposed to be Written by Alexander Selkirk (the original of Robinson Crusoe) by William Cowper (1731-1800)
[Page 250. line 27] Berbulda ORG suggests this might be the Chindwin River in Upper Burma.
[Page 251, line 30] injudicious predecessor he was Macnamara, (page 249, line 23) who may well have belonged to the Bannockburn Medical Crusade (page 247, line 20)
[Page 252, line 5] God of Things as they Should Be [not traced, information will be welcomed; Ed.]
[Page 252, line 8] the Curse of Eve See Genesis, 3,16:
… I will greatly multiply thy sorrow and thy conception; in sorrow thou shalt bring forth children; and thy desire shall be to thy husband, and he shall rule over thee.Lotta must have shown the Buria Kol an improved method of delivering babies.
[Page 252, line 9] the Curse of Adam See Genesis, 3,10:
In the sweat of thy face shalt thou eat bread..Justus Krenk endeavoured to make the Buria Kol, a lazy people, work at the cultivation of crops.
[Page 252, line 14] pig-nuts earth-nuts – the Conopodium, a plant of the family Umbelliferae which includes carrots, parsnips, etc.
[Page 253, line 13] Basel Canton and city in Switzerland.
[Page 253, line 15] hackle in this context, to comb flax or similar material ready for spinning and weaving.
[Page 253, line 18] tappa (or tapa) a cloth made in the South Seas from the bark of the Mulberry tree. The bark is removed and beaten until it spreads into a cloth. See Typee (1846) by Herman Melville (1819-1891), ChapterXIX, “Process of Making Tappa.”
[Page 253, line 23] “Now thank we all our God a Hymn of Thanksgiving. [no. 379 in Hymns Ancient and Modern, translated from the German of M. Rinkart and usually sung to the tune Nun Danket Alle Gott by J. Crüger (1598-1662)
[Page 254, line 8] the Red Elephant Tusk It must have been bored out to make a kind of trumpet.
[Page 255, line 4] God of Things as They Are Kipling also uses this as the last line of his verse “When Earth’s Last Picture in Painted” (1892).
[Page 255, line 21] the Shirt of Nessus In Greek mythology, Nessus, the Centaur, attempted to rape Deianira, the wife of Hercules, who shot him. The dying Centaur gave her his blood-soaked shirt saying it would reclaim Hercules if he were unfaithful to her; he was, she gave him the shirt and it killed him.
[Page 255, line 27] Nilgiri Nettle…Girardenia heterophylla See Dr Sheehan’s Kipling and Medicine Notes on Sudden Deaths and Poisoning. Poison from Stinging Plants.
[As an experienced journalist, Kipling was usually very careful to get his facts right. However, this Editor cannot suppress a small suspicion that in this case the tribesmen would have probably suffered burns when processing the material and warned Justus accordingly, destroying the point of the tale/ Written in haste for a newspaper, it probably never entered his mind that a hundred years later his story would be examined in such critical detail ; Ed.]
[J H McG.]
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